The Sweet Dreamer

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The Sweet Dreamer

April 16, 2001, 7:03 pm

Thousands of pages could she fill,Envisioning him by her side,Watching a miracle romance,Through red, bleary, weary, eyes.Sleep cannot comfort this dear sweet dreamer,For she longs to feel his...

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Re: The Sweet Dreamer

April 16, 2001, 7:43 pm

I like this poem because it first starts with the second person's tense but you reveal in the end that you're talking about yourself. Also, there were some lines that are so well written, for...

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Re: The Sweet Dreamer

April 17, 2001, 6:03 am

This was such a pleasure to read....a dreamy experience! Maureen

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Another wonderful poem S.R. I tried to reply to this last night and got booted... Never stop dreaming!! ~When the world is dark and cold, I know I'll have you to hold..someone who will chase away the...

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Re: The Sweet Dreamer

April 17, 2001, 5:22 pm

Yes dreams make life all worth living. Loved this one. you have a way of writing that just reaches out and takes the readers heart prisoner.wishing peace Jes- :0)

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